How I can add to my description?
My father told me how beautiful she was, what my eyes were so perfectly feline given mean ½ provisional. The amazing thing was as up to my forehead fine, elegant just inches away from the waterfall of my hair dark. Every day I remind myself that was perfect for him. I can still hear his voice around me, saying I thought my cheeks were so deliciously lovely pink, and small stains, color copper in my eyes were beautiful. My father made me so happy, was my inspiration in life, all my dreams and ambitions around him. I'm writing a story and ^ ^ Is the kind of first paragraph, I would add to the description a little more, I have 13 years and your help would be appreciated! x
Hi mate, his description was very good. Especially for someone his age. Do not add to much description, as it becomes boring. (Usually very descriptive skip parts)
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